I thought the story was pretty clever so I wrote it down as she said it. She used words like "bobbed" and "rustling" and I couldn't help but be proud.
I wanted to make this story into a book, but the last time I tried this it didn't go too well. I think Hadley got overwhelmed with all the writing and lost interest. So instead of having her rewrite her own words, I typed up the sentences twice, taped one copy on a baggy, then cut up parts of the second copy for Hadley to put together.
She put her words in order, then glued them onto pages I made for her.
Then she illustrated her story.
Here's the story: The Spring Who Save the Baby Squirrel that was Stuck in the Mug of Hot Coffee
by Hadley
One day I heard an annoying rustling sound. It was a squirrel that was stuck in a mug of hot coffee.
So I bobbed along the path to save the baby squirrel.
The baby squirrel was by a cat-o. A cat-o is the Spanish word for cap.*
After I saved the squirrel I bobbed along the path to tell my mommy and daddy all about my adventure.
The End.
(*Hadley's likes to make up a words and say "That's Spanish for.....")
This is a real win-win! Hadley isn't daunted by all that writing, and she indirectly learns about structuring text at the same time. I think her Spanish words are so cute!
ReplyDeleteHow cute! She looks very proud of her story, too!
ReplyDeleteYou should be proud! This is awesome on so many levels: creativity, writing, reading, and on. Very neat.
ReplyDeleteI love it! Great work, mum- this is a wonderful literacy experience.
ReplyDeletequoalo!!!!!
ReplyDelete*** that's Spanish for: brilliant mom shares terrific post with the world. What a treasure to save for years ahead, when she has her first book-reading at her best-seller's launch!!
Very impressive Momma! Tell your daughter I really liked her story. The way you supported your daughter just enough is awesome. I love the proud look on her face!
ReplyDeleteI'm sure I'll be adding a link to this post on my blog someday to show parents how to encourage their children to write.